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Career Development Center

110 Netzer Admin. Building
SUNY College at Oneonta
Oneonta, NY 13820
(607) 436-2534
career@oneonta.edu

Office Hours:
Monday - Friday
8:30am - 4:30pm

Cover Letter Writing Guidelines


I.     Factors to consider before contacting a prospective employer
II.    Letter writing suggestions
III.   Review Sample Letters
IV.  Write the Actual Letter
V.   Develop an Organizational System
VII. COVER LETTER OUTLINE
 


I. Factors to consider before contacting a prospective employer

1. Do I have a definite interest in the organization - it's products, services, and goals, etc.?

2. Is the work in line with my interests, education, and experience?

3. Is the place of employment within the boundaries of my geographical preference?

4. Am I willing to invest the time necessary to do a successful and thorough job search with this organization?
 

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II. Letter writing suggestions

In writing a letter to a prospective employer you should keep the following three objectives in mind:

  1. Present your reason for writing.
     
  2. Create a desire for your services.
     
  3. Ask for action, such as an interview.



Below are some suggested DO'S and DON'T'S:

DO

  •  Follow rules of layout and format of a standard business letter.
     
  • Type on good quality paper. Always send an original letter, never a copy.
     
  • Address, whenever possible, to an individual along with his or her correct title. Always address the letter to the person who will make the employment decision (not necessarily the personnel manager). Avoid using "Dear Sir or Madam" and "To whom it may concern" if at all possible. A telephone call to the organization may help you obtain the correct information.
     
  • Spell, punctuate, and paragraph correctly. It should be perfect!
     
  • Tailor your letters to the employer as much as possible in regards to geographic location, your personal accomplishments, or friends you have in common.
     
  • Take advantage of any link to the employer that can put your foot in the door or give you an edge over the competition (i.e. mention names).
     
  • Slant letter toward what you can offer the employer, not what you think he/she should be offering you.
     
  • Be brief, concise, and to the point.
     
  • Refer to your resume.
     
  • Close with a direct request for some sort of action. Normally this would be a request for an interview appointment.
     
  • Follow-up the mailing of your cover letter with a phone call asking to speak with someone regarding your letter of application.

DON'T

  • Develop one letter to send to all employers. Do send an original letter to each employer - each original should be tailored and neat.
     
  • Use stiff language or phrasing -- avoid vagueness.
     
  • Be gimmicky in an attempt to be original or clever.
     
  • Overload with constant use of the word " I "
     
  • Be excessively emphatic about your reliability, capacity for hard work or intelligence. This kind of self-appraisal is usually best understated. The appearance and tone of your letter and resume can say more about you, than you can gracefully say about yourself.
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III. Review Sample Letters

The Career Library located in 109 Netzer Administration Building has several books on this topic. You may also find similar resources in any bookstore.

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IV. Write the Actual Letter

You may have a typed draft of your cover letter critiqued by a staff member in the Career Development Center. A written critique will be ready for pickup within 48 hours.
 



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V. Develop an Organizational System

Before you begin sending any letters, it is important that you devise some way of keeping track of when and where you've mailed correspondence. For instance, if you send a letter to Mr. X asking for an interview and offer to call him during the week of June 6th, you need to have that date on record so you can be sure to meet the commitment. Also, if you are sending out 40 letters of application to various employers it can be critical to know what you've said in particular letters to be able to follow them up with accuracy. Always keep a copy of each letter you send for your future referral.



REMEMBER . . .

Your paperwork is a reflection of you. Employers will not offer an interview to an applicant who has submitted sloppy, misspelled paperwork. You may want to have an English major or professor proofread your letter for grammatical and punctuation errors.


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VII. COVER LETTER OUTLINE



Address
City, State Zip Code
Today’s Date

(four line spaces)

Name of Addressee
Title
Name of Organization
Street Address or Box Number
City, State, Zip Code

(two line spaces)

Dear (Mr., Mrs., Ms., Dr.) Addressee:

(one line space)

Your opening paragraph should state the reason for the letter, the specific position or type of work for which you are applying and how you learned of the job opportunity. You may want to state briefly why you are interested in the position.

(one line space)

Your middle paragraph should sell your skills and explain how your academic and/or experiential background qualifies you for the position. Point out specific achievements or unique qualifications. Include any special skills that may be useful in the position, i.e., abilities with computers, administration. Don't just repeat information in your resume, single out a few especially salient factors: expand on an item or two of special relevance. Be concise and to the point.

(one line space)

In your closing paragraph, refer the reader to your enclosed resume and focus on the action to follow. Indicate your desire for a personal interview. You may want to indicate your flexibility or state a time or times when you will be in the vicinity of his/her office. You may want to say that you will call your addressee in a few days to see about arranging a mutually convenient time when you could visit. State that your references can be sent at their request. A specific and positive statement about what you will do next or what you wish for them to do next is more effective than a vague hope, but don't be pushy.

(two line spaces)

Sincerely,
(four line spaces)

Full Signature

Typed Full Name

(two line spaces)

Enclosure



Format -- Type your letter neatly on 8 1/2 x 11 inch bond paper. Keep it clean and free from error corrections. Type all letters individually, never mass-produce them. Always address your letter to a specific person by name and title, rather than by title or department alone. Let the letter reflect your individuality but do not appear familiar, cute, under confident, or over confident. You are writing to a stranger about a subject that is serious to you both.

Download the complete resume and cover letter guide

 

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For more information about the above or any of the programs and services offered through the Career Development Center, contact the Center in 110 Netzer, phone: (607) 436-2534, e-mail: career@oneonta.edu.
 
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